The Legacy of Rifle River Mills
Characters
- Julia (Julie is her nickname) Elizabeth Stoddard - Main Character - Age 10
- Lilly Anne Lloyd - Julie's Best Friend - Age 9
- Linda Louise Rice - Julie's Grandmother (Paternal)
- Elijah Owen Rice - Julie's Grandfather (Andrew's Step-Father)
- Andrew Paul Stoddard - Julie's Dad - Age 38
- Adriana Leigh Stoddard - Julie's Mom - Age 30 (Maiden Name Hoffman)
- Kelly Lynn Hoffman - Julie's First Cousin and Good Friend - Age 11
- Jessica Marie Hoffman - Julie's First Cousin (Kelly's little sister) - Age 9
- James Austin Stoddard - Julie's Little Brother - Age 2
- Ashley Rose Stoddard - Julie's Little Sister - Age 7
* May include an older brother for Julie, James, and Ashley.
- James Andrew Stoddard - Julie's Deceased Grandfather.
- Died very young.
- Started Stoddard's Landing.
- Wolf Payne - An old man who tells the children the old Native American Legends.
- May or may not be Native American.
- Bear Reid - Young classmate of the Hoffman and Stoddard children.
- May be related to Wolf Payne.
- May or may not be Native American.
- Angelica Lynn White - Julie, Lilly, and Kelly's teacher - also Bear's. - 4th grade?
Atmosphere/Setting
- Stoddard's Landing - The Stoddard family's rental and camping business, set in Rifle River Mills.
- Rifle River Mills - VERY rural - essentially Omer - call the river The River.
- Mixture of sand, clay, mud, Ash, Pine, Maple, Birch, Poplar - give away location?
- Describe old highway bridge used to bolster riverbank - US Route 22.
- Pirate Island - Contains the fort of the Stoddard and Hoffman children; small island in the middle of The River.
* I may change the name to Arenac Island ("A Sandy Place" - essentially it will be a sand bar
in the middle of the river) - Not quite sure yet though, as it would certainly give away the county.
- The Plains - Mysterious woodlands along The River; at the heart of the mystery.
- Lake Glen - Headwaters of The River (may or may not use).
- HQ - Fort on PI built by Dad and Grandpa, with the help of the Stoddard and Hoffman girls.
- Shiloh - Nearby city where the children go to school; base on Standish; nearest city of any size.
1 Comments:
Abby -
Thanks for all of the advice!
First off, I totally agree with you on the name of the island - I even thought that as I wrote it down. The thing is, I would have named it something so cliche as a child. I think I am going to come up with another name for it though.
Your suggestion regarding the names are great. I'm going to work on revising it now, and then fill out character sketches.
I'm think of having the main character (Linda - but renamed as Julie) narrate the story from an adult perspective (I'm going to make her 30ish). What do you think?
More later.
Lindsey
7:36 PM
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